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Verse 1 (Wyze Stingray):
I didn't like the opening lines, but the Van Gogh line was ok to show the depression, the lisp line "Its War Spawn" had me dying of laughter. Great punch. Some of the other lines, weren't that great, but you were on-beat with a regularly nice flow, good job. I can't wait to see what War Spawn has.

Verse 2 (War Spawn):
Nice opening flow, but the disses were eh. The KOTD diss was ok, nice lyrics, and the ventrilo hit was good. The punch-in line was good, can't hold a job, can't hold a flow, great job. I really enjoyed most of the disses, but the only one that hit hard to me was the can't-hold-a-flow punch, good. Seems even as of right now.

Verse 3 (Wyze Stingray):
Amazing opening, flip after flip, great job, I was rolling. The exorcist line was very good, very clever, nice. More broke than the U.S. Government was ok, but the ending line took it. I loved the entire verse, really good job, on-beat throughout as well, not too slow, not too fast, good job. At this point, I wanna vote for Wyze, but I'm still interested to see what Spawn has up next.

Verse 4 (War Spawn):
Canadian lame brain was a good diss, opened up with a dope flow, good lyrics, interested for more. The bad jokes line was great, but lacked a better delivery. More punch-ins was good, but the rest of the lyrics just seemed to lack cleverness and a nice delivery. Definitely had some haymakers, but was hard to compare to Wyze's 2nd verse. I'd have to give it to Wyze.

Overall, Wyze had a better flow, and funnier lyrics, better flips, and a great delivery. Spawn had certain lines that were delivered great, and others that weren't, he didn't seem as nearly as consistent as Wyze throughout the verse. Although he definitely had some great punches, it just wasn't enough for me. Good job guys, but the victory goes to Wyze Stingray.

Verse 1 (TK):
Almost every line was a personal attack at Smurf's music or life, and definitely was a very good start to the battle. TK came out punching immediately, and I liked that. Some of his disses/punchlines though just weren't there for me, and I didn't like how he'd ended his verse with the Bio on FB lines, they just didn't land. He started off great though, and I definitely felt the lines ending with "dawg", definitely a good first verse. At this point, TK has it in his hands on lyrics and flow, great job.

Verse 2 (Dirty Smurf):
Opening with the Slim Shady line was pretty good, but the mad-dog-like-I-got-rabies line has been overplayed so many times in the past. There were some good disses here, but a lot of the verse was generic stuff that he could've said to almost any rapper. Smurf took the gangster approach, and I couldn't appreciate the simple flow, he was beat in that category. I did really like the "gainin weight cause I'm eatin good" line though. He's still in this at this point, but TK definitely still has the lead.

Verse 3 (TK):
Opened up with funny lines again, almost immediately, and everything was a good flip at Smurf's first verse. The shot yourself flip, the constant Smurf-name flips, and the 8 Mile flip, were all heavyweight punches. Great job, with a great flow again as well. At this point, I feel like TK has taken the battle, but we'll see where Dirty Smurf goes with his 2nd verse.

Verse 4 (Dirty Smurf):
A little bit better, I definitely rolled over in my chair laughing at the opening line, great punch, but it didn't hit as hard as it could have simply because you'd already mentioned the slim shady similarities throughout your entire first verse, so it almost seemed played out, as clever as it was. The rest of the verse is good, but still a somewhat simple flow, and some of the punches just weren't landing with authority. This was a good battle, but TK has taken it.

Overall, I would definitely have to give TK the victory on lyrics, flow, and delivery. Dirty Smurf has the voice and emotion that would definitely help him in these battles, but he just didn't back it up, as he spent most of his time dwelling on the Slim Shady disses, compiled with generic disses inbetween. As-to-where, almost everything TK said was a personal attack on his music or him.

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